I have to agree with jibjab910, a tiny bit.
Mr. Weebls song is very, really, ginormously... stuck in my head. Which is a compliment.
The lyrics on the other hand... You've done way better. Rhyming, for example. The lyrics in the 'own ward' part were dissapointing IMO.
On the other hand, Scampi only had two words rhyming and that animation never left my memory. Then again, I loved the Trevor animations too.
So the song is great, but only the bagel line made me laugh; mainly because of the... shall I say strange humor of Sexual Lobster:
You managed to fit in a surprisingly funny, though disturbing bagel part.
Since you made it, I think it really shouldn't be a surprise anymore though...
That said, the animation was well done, but again, I've seen better. I miss the shadows on the characters like in your Manwhore songs or Captain Planet animations.
Overall I guess it's hard to get better at what you do when you're already one of the best. I think Babies is one of the 'lesser funny' animations, but you two do make a great team.
I shall rate this a 9. Though I didn't enjoy it as much as you guys' other work, the people of Newgrounds think an average score of 9.6 is in place. I don't rate an instant 10 with "Great!" as constructive criticism. But I also don't rate low just because I didn't laugh (hard), because lots of people clearly did.
Now you boys go to your room and think about why you didn't get that 10! (from me ._.)
No srs, you guys are great.
you do love comments?
then here's another one for you :)
I like the idea, everything is simply colored in the beginning of the song. But when the beat comes in you bring in the fish and what not.
I think it's a good animation! but... didn't you submit this earlier? I know I've seen this before. And it would be great if you'd finish the ending.
thanks n ill prolly finish it and i might resubmit it once school starts that way i can finish it as a project :p
thanks 4 the comment
Way 2 go!
This has to be the best idea for a collab!
Nice variation in style.
Some endings could've been better though.
I mean, why wouldn't they beat up Nene to get the candy?
Still, nice work! ;)
For a first flash, it's pretty good.
But you could think it more through next time...
Like, I would turn it into a loop or something. That would be more funny because then he keeps wrecking the tank over and over =P
But that's just my idea of a goooood fail ^^
It's designed to loop. This is roughly 7 months old, I just cut the first frame (@ 24 fps its not noticeable, even to me) and added the loader. The loader has the problem of stopping it every time. I suppose I could get around this with a counter that increments on the very first play and then skips the loader, but I only know VB6 for programming.
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